Saturday, October 25, 2014

Ethics!

Hi friends! Thursday's class was all about ethics...


We formed groups of two and looked over a tough ethics case. Each group decided whether or not to print the story, wrote a lead and the presented their decision to the class.

CASE 1 - Ryan and Jenica
recap: The Arlington County Child Protection Services' husband failed to register as a sex offender when the family moved to Virginia. Off the record, the victim was his daughter.
Ryan and Jenica decided to print the story, but not include who the victim was. The class discussed whether the information about the daughter should be printed, since it will come out anyways.

CASE 2- Charlotte and Zach
recap: Popular Sheriff makes sexist comments during a public meeting and in an interview afterwards.
Charlotte and Zach decided to print the story.

CASE 3- Leah and Malcolm
recap: A well-known teacher is found dead from practicing autoerotic asphyxiation.
We decided to print a story about autoerotic asphyxiation in general. As a class, we decided to lead with the news about the teacher and then go on to write about autoerotic asphyxiation.

CASE 4- Wallis and Ryan
recap: A veteran firefighter died on the job, and the town and newspaper honored him. Later, it was discovered that he was drunk on the job, and the cops kept it a secret.
Wallis and Ryan decided to print the story.

CASE 5- Emma and Liesey
recap: Former FBI Director overheard talking about using the Patriot Act to question anyone he wanted.
Emma and Liesey decided to print the story. The class discussed if this was a violation of privacy.

CASE 6- Jialin and Jacob
recap: The paper writes a story about a family with a young daughter who has a rare form of cancer. Another family calls with a similar story and wants an article too.
Jialin and Jacob decided not to print the second story. The class discussed why the first story was newsworthy while the second wasn't.

CASE 7- Danielle and Shayna
recap: A veteran cop was shot on duty. It was suicide. The police are trying to cover it up so the family can receive the death benefit.
Daniella and Shayna decided to report the truth, but not lead with the fact that it was suicide.

CASE 8- Liz and Alex
recap: The first baby of the New Year was born to a mother who lives upstairs from her parents, is unemployed and on welfare.
Liz and Alex decided to print the story, focusing on the baby and not the mother's living situation. The class discussed whether or not the mother's situation was a story.

Presentation Tips:

  • Giving good presentations is 55% body language, 38% voice and 7% words. Although words are very important, without a strong voice and body language the words are lost.
  • Look at people's foreheads when you're thinking of what to say next.
  • When reading from notes, look down to get your cue and then look up to speak.
Homework for next Thursday:

Come to class well acquainted with the story handout about Stefanie Ferguson.

Friday, October 17, 2014

NBC4's Culver on Broadcast Vs. Print

By Alex Harrsingh and Jacob Atkins

NBC4 reporter David Culver joined us and provided an inside look at the battle between print and broadcast journalists on breaking news stories. Both he and our previous guest, Washington Post reporter Taylor Shapiro, are covering the story of missing UVA coed Heather Graham.



Background:
- It’s his second year at NBC4.
- He’s usually out in the field covering stories in Northern Virginia.
- Went to college at College of William and Mary.
- He always wanted to go into journalism and communications but his college had no journalism or communications programs. However, he said that you don’t have to have to go through a journalism or communications program to go into journalism.
- His first internship was at WRC in between sophomore and junior year of college. He pitched the idea of a writing a blog while in Spain to keep in touch with WRC. He did it for his 5 months abroad.
- Later, his college president removed a historic cross from the school chapel. Christian conservative alumni stopped donating after that. The backlash forced him to resign and the president told the students. Culver sent an email to WRC, who then sent an anchor to the school to cover the story. Culver provided important assistance. Culver later got a job as web producer of the WRC site during senior year, per that anchor’s recommendation. Culver was able to post his own content on the site, resulting in air time as well. It turned into a reporter position, and then into an anchor position. He wanted to come home, back to Virginia, so NBC4 worked out for him.
- During his sophomore in high school he sent emails to WRC and was able to develop a relationship for when he was ready to work. He knew his limits, and adopted a strategy of "pleasant persistence.”

Tips:
- He says you should maintain a true relationship rather than only contacting people when you want something.
- Craft new emails each time you email a potential employer.
- Make more personal relationships (not work related).
- Invest in people even when others might not.
- You have to be  very focused on every word you use, the slightest bad word choice can “burn a source.”
- Be genuine and develop relationships with genuine people.

Creating good relationships with sources:
- You have to be able to develop stories through sources.
- His family was his original source.
- He started to meet people in PR offices and then made relationships with people in the field.

Experiences with broadcast and print journalism:
- He says that sometimes in broadcast you need the time to gather information. Related story- He presented the police predictions for the arrival of hannah graham suspect during a broadcast. It turns out the suspect came in 20 minutes before the broadcast and drove behind Culver during it.
- Time constraints for on air programs makes it harder to get more developed stories.
- Print journalism allows for more time to simply observe.

Advantages of print: time to tell full stories, space, don’t have to monitor possible stories as there are more reporters
Advantages of broadcast: easier to develop relationship with viewer, visuals are a big advantage

- He never looked at the web as demise of TV, more complementary instead

Questions:
Do you work from script or just go with it?
Recorded: script goes through various people before it gets to Culver.
Live: Bullet points.

Is the quality of news threatened by the new on-demand media consumers?
Education vs. entertainment: he considers himself to be an entertainer and educator. He
tries to put out the strongest points while keeping the audience in mind. He tries to bring facts while also bringing emotion.

Is it ever hard to keep your own emotions contained?
With breaking news, he will present the story through his own eyes. With politics, he will have no issue not showing emotion. Basically to be genuine when it’s necessary.

Have you ever had to not run a story because of who the story is about?
Managers would prevent a story if there was a lack of information, but not because of who the story is about.

With really big stories, do you ever scramble for information in between broadcasts?
He has to be writing stories in advance for future broadcasts, like planning out the 6:00 show during the 5:00 show. So if new information pops up then it will be in the proceeding show.

With on demand society, do you find yourself judging stories by their interest?
He can make stories interesting even when there might not be a large audience interest in what the story would have been.

How is being cuban american in the industry?
He notes that minorities go in cycles. That there is a push to get more hispanics on air so the growing population can relate, although, there is also a necessity to communicate (can you speak spanish?)

Were you well versed in camera equipment?
He has a camera and has learned the skills for behind the scenes camera work.


Does your personal image ever work against you?
While he filters himself a little bit, he won't try to fit a mold. However, earlier on in his career he tried to emulate other anchors. He quickly learned that being genuine was better. Also, while it is hard to get credibility considering his age, his age can also be used as an advantage.

Is there a possibility for a personal life in your field?
Yes there are opportunities for a social life, but in his case he’s so passionate he does not see a major need for a social life.



Class Notes on Broadcast Journalism

Words to live by: write for the ear, not the eye
Goal: you are writing news for the anchor to read off with as much clarity and simplicity as possible

Major differences between print and broadcast journalism:
·      Unlike print journalism, broadcast journalists write in the PRESENT TENSE
o   The present tenses conveys the IMMEDIACY of a story, which is an advantage of broadcast journalism
o   Example: A Washington man is dead tonight after his car flipped on I-495

·      Put attributions before quotes rather than after
o   Example: GOP leader says the Teat Party scandal could cost Republicans the Senate

·      Never use “quote marks.” Instead you must explicitly write out the quote for the news anchor to deliver the news
o   Example: The principal of Longfellow Elementary School says, quote, get to class kids, unquote

·      Don’t abbreviate words unless completely necessary
o   Example: not NAACP but N-DOUBLE-A-C-P

·      Unlike the inverted pyramid structure in print journalism, broadcast journalism uses an oval structure to tell stories to viewers
o   Climax à Cause à Effect (in that order)

·      Avoid numbers unless completely necessary
o   If you do use them, round off

Remember: your audience is in a hurry, so your writing should be brief, concise and without jargon
Remember: use short, simple tenses and write in the active voice
Remember: viewers have their hands on the clicker so get to the point fast and stress the immediacy of a story

Homework for Thursday October 23rd:
1.    Pick three out of the four highlighted stories and write leads for them in a broadcast journalism format. Have them available to pull on your computers
2.    Review this url: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/601/01 to refresh yourself about writing in the present tense


Friday, September 26, 2014

A Night with Post Reporter T. Rees Shapiro

A Look Inside the Hannah Graham Story
By Wallis Ann Neff 
9/25/14



We greeted and chit-chatted with our guest speaker for a brief minute and then continued to ask about his background, where he got his start, and what he's doing currently in Charlottesville, Va. Rees has been the Post's primary reporter on the story about missing UVA student Hannah Graham. He spoke to us live via Skype from a Starbucks.

Quick facts:


  • He is 27, young for the field.
  • Enjoys talking to students
  • He did not major in journalism- he was an english major
  • Did not want to be a journalist
  • Grew up in Va. just outside D.C. He went to Virginia Tech, liked creative writing the best, working at jimmy johns, late night, at about 8:30 roommate woke him up. Told him to “Fuck off," not realizing the tragic VTech campus shootings had begun. April 16th 2007, started with the school newspaper, new to journalism, “Aren’t you going to cover this?” took advantage of being a student (got in touch with people)
    • BIG BREAK: got a contact through Facebook, randomly called a man who directed him through a friend - she was there. “All I remember was my professor’s head exploding."
  • Continued as as an editor through the school newspaper, got a job at the Washington Post, Copy Aide, very low position, wrote obituaries for 18 months,
  • Doritos creator was his favorite obit
  • Was promoted to write about kindergarten and education. called it "circle of life"


After we talked to him about his background, more questions. One of the first was about his experiences and time in Charlottesville. In the midst of the chaos that is the Hannah Graham story, he's been able to talk with friends, as well as her parents. Graham was reported missing by police on Sept. 14th, at 7:30.
Shapiro's first position on the story was that maybe she was she’s hiding out, or laying low. Stress getting to her, college issues. He used basic facts for a short story. He's also spoken to people who knew her, softball coach, band instructor, and they both have reported her being a good student and a pretty normal girl. He recalled a candlelight vigil on Thursday, which was as he put it, moving.

After his account, Professor Piacente opened it up to questions from the class.

Dani- reading the articles, more troubled less balanced. How do you navigate between concern and balanced view in readership.

Taylor Shapiro- since I am young, one thing I can emphasize that I am obsessed with accuracy and fairness. People don’t trust you when you’re not fair. We approached the story with interviews, we talked to the police. Talked to both sides. Racially charged.



Wallis- have you noticed any racial tension with the Hannah Graham case?
TS- Racially charged, we’ve heard this story before- since the 1940s, skeptical about it being a black person charged. UVA, middle of virginia, middle of town has a statue of Robert E Lee. Tenor of conversation if it were anywhere else, tension.

Prof- When I search Missing Persons, young women who have been missing for a while, with cultural names. Would you be there if she were black?
TS- Relecia Rudd, missing for more than a year. WaPo crushed the story, girl lived next to a methadone clinic. Story was on lock. We would be there because it’s a story

Dani- Favorite Obit?
TS -sometimes you get lucky, and it doesn't happen all the time. Best Obit ever- have you ever heard of Doritos? Arch West, he was the guy who invented Doritos. Aren't obits dead and sad? No, it’s how you look at it. You need to put a fun spin. No one cares about Arch West, but we care about chips.

Zach- What is your opinion on the oxford comma?
TS- You think I would know what the oxford comma is? I don’t give a shit, I do what looks right.

Emma-This is every parents worse nightmare- we are supposed to put in the twist in our leads- whats the most grabbing detail
TS- The most grabbing detail comes from the talk with the parents on sunday- the first version is before the press conference, one published during, one specifically for the print, where I talked to the parents. We got this exclusive interview with the parents, lets lead with whats new to our readers. Yes you want the most useful, not always the most interesting. Advice- 99% of the time twitter is useless. Inaccuracies, idiots spewing idiotness on the internet. I need to get in touch with people, or need to find issues. I look to confirm it myself. My job is to get interviews, if I’m tweeting all the time I’m not working and doing real reporting

Liz- So how much authority or autonomy do you have in choosing a story to cover?
TS- Two answers, how much autonomy- boss says go to here, I go to there and write about whatever I want, I get the first swat- and they can tell me no,
Who decides if this a  big story- the readers. Good Idea about what this means, I ask my editor about how many page views I get (av. 20,000) Now I’m getting 3 million page views about this story.

He ended with a thumbs up, and a good night.

9/25 Class notes from Emma Griswold:

1. Current Events Quiz
2. White House Security Discussion
-Man armed with knife jumped fence, sprinted across the yard and into the White House
3. Hannah Graham Discussion
            -Reporters need to be careful and objective
            -Reporters need ins among police/investigators
            -Also consider calling the school, friends, or other sources
            -Matthews arrested; found camping on a beach in Texas
4. Shapiro’s Article: “Every Parent’s Worst Nightmare”
            -Shapiro might sympathize; quotes Matthews as “a gentle giant”
            -To find more information on Matthews, go to: social media, classmates, city gov., family, etc.
            -Matthews’ pastor was extremely surprised
            **Why is there so much attention? Racial bias?**
5. Lessons for Journalistic Practices
            -NEVER PAY FOR INFORMATION
            -“Off the record” is a press tradition
                        àThere are no set rule
                        àTry to negotiate if an individual says “off the record” [why?]
                        àQuestion their reasons
                        àRemain credible by respecting their wishes
                        àBUT, in the end the choice is yours
            -Everyday people are “citizen journalists” due to smart phones
6. Main Points from Rhami Edits
            -Mention the most interesting part: the racial slur
            -Context: who is Ali Rhami?
            -DON’T USE OBVIOUS QUOTES: “His parents have been informed…”
            -Watch out for “Magic Bat”: “He was hit by a bat from behind.”
            -Always use Attribution in lead
            -D.C. Police not police: it’s police without the title
-Cut superfluous words
-ALWAYS PAST TENSE
7. Shapiro Skype Conference [Wallis took Notes]

Homework:
            -Email Wallis one “take-away” from Shapiro Conference
            -Story due Sunday the 28th @ 5pm [DON’T BE LATE]
            -Choose a story to defend due by next class
            -CH 9, 10, & 14




Friday, September 19, 2014

Class Notes - September 18, 2014

Setting the tone:  Surrender by Cheap Trick.  I'd make up some class significance for the song, but I'm up against a deadline.

Intro! Urban Outfitters

We began with a discussion of the "vintage" blood-stained Kent State sweatshirt that Urban Outfitters put on sale the other week.

UO apparently has a history of immoral/offensive strategic decisions designed to boost publicity (shirts glorifying eating disorders, mental disorders, etc.).  We discussed whether or not all publicity actually is good publicity, specifically when scandals like this are likely to alienate a large portion of the U.S. population.

Prof's take on this for his PR firm's blog:

We decided it was difficult to understand their motivation; hypothetically, actions like these would only shrink their market.  We considered that a defining trait of UO's target demographic (young teens?) could be that they just doesn't care about being sensitive about painful issues.

Exercises!

Prof. Piacente projected some of our leads from last class to review.

We went over some basic rules of comma usage ("Let's eat, Grandma!" "Let's eat Grandma!").

We were then assigned to write leads for one of three stories.  A few of our generation's heroes then volunteered to project their leads on the screen for the class to gently dismember.  Piacente shocked the class by suggesting use of the word "chatty" in a lead.  Apparently, leads can be cute, when appropriate.

Homework!  First guest speaker next week: Taylor Shapiro, with the Washington Post.  The assignment is to read two articles he’s written (he used to do obituaries, now covers VA schools) and to come up with two questions you will ask in class that you can’t find the answer to online, aka something that you need the person to answer the question (writing choices, etc.).  "Stump him."

We were also given two grammar worksheets to complete.

Peace out.

Tuesday, September 16, 2014

Class 3 Notes

Discussed the article on American University Professor Pitts
            -Did the headline suggest a bias
            -Is not a personal opinion when it is a fact

Learned the concept of short and dramatic headlines
            -Active verbs make good headlines
            - Journalist Code of Ethics handout
            -Short summary of the news report
            -Grammar of headlines -> Use nouns and leave out words that are not necessary

Clip from The Shipping News
            -Further elaborated on how to create a eye catching headline
            - “It's finding the center of your story, the beating heart of it, that's what makes a            reporter. You have to start by making up some headlines. You know: short,           punchy, dramatic headlines. Now, have a look, what do you see?”
            - “Imminent Storm Threatens Village”
-  “Village Spared From Deadly Storm”

Went over homework

Wrote a news story based on information given in class:
            -Baby Dies of Heat Exhaustion While Mom Gambles.
-  Found the, who, what, when, where, and why of the story
            - Wrote a full report based off of the information given
-  Discussed leaving out our personal bias and/or feelings towards the issue
            - State the facts of the issue

Homework for Thursday:
            Chapters 3 and 4 (grammar)
            Create 5 headlines
            Describe your personal brand (Forbes article and handout)

            5 bullets to how you live your brand