Tuesday, February 27, 2018

Tuesday, February 26, 2018


Intae Park
2/26/18

'Ethics Night'
We started off with a little exercise: 'Personal Brand'

• How do you define ethics
     - Fairness
     - Exposing the truth
     - Giving the coverage they deserve
  : There is no one universal rule for ethics.

Ethics Cases
1. Case 1: The Director’s Husband
: A director of child protection services kept her sex offender husband hidden.
• Decision: report.
• Reason: Though it happened four years ago, not reporting a sexual predator is a big deal.

Things to consider:
• any consideration to the daughter?
• the process of verifying the story: talking to Mrs. Smith?
• how would you go through the interview?
• Saying “no comment” = saying you’re guilty.


2. Case 2: Offensive Official
   : A popular sheriff was in a public meeting, discussing housing female inmates. Used the term “recycle.”
• Decision: report.
• Reason: Just stating the conversation, leaving the decision to the readers.

Things to consider:
• Readers’ sensibility? They can be offended.
• explaining the quote as “disturbing”: same as writing the quote twice. Don’t need explanation.


3. Case 3: Autoerotic Asphyxiation
: A young man was found hanging from a tree. It was an accidental death by autoerotic asphyxiation.
• Decision: report.
• Reason: If you don’t report it, people would assume his death as a suicide. Already a widespread rumor. Try to be informative.

Things to consider:
• consideration to the family?
• saying “accidental” can raise more questions.
• take into account how readers would react differently in Washington D.C. and a small town


4. Case 4: Tarnished hero
: A firefighter was praised as a hero, but the cops kept the fact that he was drunk and drove to the blaze, not following captain’s orders.
• Decision: report.
• Reason: You wrote a touching story. It is your responsibility to inform the readers that the cops kept it secret.

Things to consider:
• procedures for off-duty firefighters?
• any similar incidents?


5. Case 5: FBI Director
: A former FBI Director leaked sensitive information about locking up innocent people, while he was drunk on a train.
• Decision: Not immediately run, dig in more. (Definitely run it someday.)

Things to consider:
• what if FBI says “we don’t do that”?
• how convince him to do the story?
• just run the story with what we have now?: Run it, keep following up.


6. Case 6: Fund Drive
: You reported a local family with a sick child with huge bills. A fund drive was planned. Got several more calls. Still run the following stories?
• Decision: Run both stories. But it should have uniqueness.

Things to consider:
• A large city would have a lot of requests.
• how would you tell the fourth, fifth story?
• if write one big story, what about a month after? (To the family: unique. To the readers: same story.)
• Style section: human interest. Give a particular section dedicated to these stories.


7. Case 7: New-year Baby
: Every year, you run the first baby born on a new year. This time, you found interesting information. A single mom chose to have another child, abusing the welfare system.
• Decision: Run.

Things to consider:
• edit out the quotes?: That’s what makes this story interesting. / Doesn’t matter. It’s just a new-year born baby.
• if leave out the welfare, what makes this unique?: Inherently, it’s the first baby of the year.
• give different considerations to people who are not used to doing interviews?
• covering the welfare could look like your paper could be leaning politically.

Every one of these is a tough call. Actual stories, with some facts made easier.

What really happened:
1. The director resigned.
2. The sheriff was popular because he said stuff like that. Knew his base, played to it.
3. Published it, making it more informative.
4. Raised a lot of questions to the cop, fire department: Procedure for off-duty personnel
5. Was on CNN, a former official was talking. Somebody alerted the official being live-tweeted what he said. Found the person, they took a picture and had a beer.
6. Flooded with calls from other families. Carved out a section and contributed it to those families. (before social media became prevalent)
7. Put the quotes in the story. The woman got harassing phone calls, moved away.

Big takeaway: These are what journalists face every day. News executives spend hours debating these.


Homework
1. Watch 2 stories by NBC4's David Culver. Come in with 2 questions you couldn't find the answers to online.
2. Write the Little Mickey press release. Practice - Bring to class (Word version)
3. Read Writing for Broadcast, Ch. 9 - 3 takeaways


Posted by Intae Park

Wednesday, February 21, 2018



Melan Shannon

2/19/18     

Communicating in a Crisis
The exercise on the “Pictionary” story with two added developments gave us the opportunity to write as actual journalists would, with stories changing as life does.

Pictionary Story

- First and foremost: What’s unusual about the story? That is what you use to characterize your lead! (what’s unique about the inmate fight story is that it all started over a game of Pictionary)

- Be selective with your quotes: Does it add to the story? As the professor said, some quotes that seem unnecessary can give the story “color”.
Ex. “We don’t do Pictionary in my prison. These guys will be scrubbing toilets for six months.”

Crisis Control: Notes on Developments of a Story

- Think about a time (or times) you were 95% done with something but then realized you really weren’t done...that’s life and that’s how writing in a newsroom is sometimes!

- When it comes to a story being updated, whether it’s once or twice, the new information is the most important information.
*You have to assume the reader doesn’t know about the original story.

A Different Type of Storytelling: Intro to Public Relations

“Every organization has a story to tell-and it’s the job of PR professionals to tell it.”
- There are distinct difference/similarities between writing for the news vs. writing for PR. We have to be mindful of this.

*Main difference: Journalists serve the general public and PR specialists serve organizations.
News stories will be as objective and accurate as possible, while PR messages will be structured towards specific clients. (Reference handout: “What is Public Relations?)

- The ultimate goal of the PR person: “generating goodwill toward the client.”

What’s a Press Release?

- A PRESS RELEASE IS NOT A NEWS REPORT!

- It is a message crafted by a PR person that is representing a particular organization.
*Press release first priority: deliver the message (you can still be strategic about this)
(Reference handout: “How to Format a Press Release”)

- No “psychic distance” between you and your client. You are the company.
Make the company look as good as possible! (with integrity)
Ex. “The Death of Little Mickey”
-Include info on other animal deaths to provide clarity + so it doesn’t get out another way

- Your headline needs a strong action verb, without that it’s just a label.
*The lead can include the same words from the heading.

In conclusion
, we did a good amount of work and were tossed in many directions to ultimately come back to news writing. This is good experience because it mimics what writing for the mass media is actually like. You may have to switch between writing news stories and press releases. Basically, writing styles shouldn’t intersect unless it’s intentional.

Homework
1. Complete the “Pictionary” story with the two added developments: screwdriver/death
 (sent in email by Professor) This is due by 5 PM tommorow, Wednesday. 2/21/18

2. Read Chapters 9, 11, 12 (Top 3 Takeaways each) Read: Writing to be Heard Pg.173-174; Do radio story, P. 195, “Historic Document”   Due next Monday!

3. Read all handouts:
1. “What is Public Relations?” packet
2. Journalism Code of Ethics
3. “News Releases that Make News” by Professor Piacente
4.  Review: “How to Format a Press Release”
Posted by Melan Shannon

Tuesday, February 13, 2018

Key Points from 2/12/18
By Marshall Child


TIPS:
-       Remember use numerals for numbers higher than 10
-       Always use past tense for print leads
-       Look at five minute style book for what to hyphenate, state abbreviations, numerals etc..


HW & QUIZZES:

-       Grammar quiz next week on (31-38 of textbook) in addition to current events quiz
-       Read Ch. 13 for public relations writing (three takeaways)
-       Due Date for next story: Wednesday at 5:30 p.m. (Ali Rhami)


*Find the heartbeat of a story